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Need your help finetuning this, so tell me what i need to do

First time with Reason 3.0 awesome program, still learning though

small collab between me and a friend i'd like to share, please review

I was a bit bored and made this with a friend in like 5 mins, could be worse...

my first creation using Ejay Hihop 6, please leave comments so i can learn from my mistake